Wk11 100wc competition

Greetings humans of earth. From here I can see vast oceans broken up by land, illuminated by stars and a single moon. This is planet earth, beautiful with animals that are innocent and people. This rock is spinning, almost doing a dance, all at peace; but is it? From here our planet looks minute in such a vastness of space. Just now I was down there surrounded by huge trees and people arguing over who’s fault it was. Now, I’m way way way above the beautiful surroundings of earth and the argument seems tiny compared to this magnificent view. It is one small step for robot one giant leap for robot kind!

5 thoughts on “Wk11 100wc competition”

  1. Very good, Joe. You create a robotic tone and a spaceous feeling. I particularly like the analogy with the first moon landing. A good mood for the end. Great stuff!

  2. That is a beautiful and amazingly descriptive and imaginative piece. I can just close my eyes and see what you are imagining. Well done Habibi. I am so proud of you. Keep it up
    Love you always

  3. I like the way you, as Ohbot Peaky, paint a picture of The Earth in space and bring perspective to our petty disagreements. Asking the question, ‘but is it?’ is a great way to draw your readers in and challenge them to interact with the story. A wonderful message well organised and presented. I hope everyone is listening. Good luck Peaky!

  4. Love your description of The Earth appearing at peace from a distance, contrasted with the disharmony of the inhabitants when viewed close up. Wise words!! Enjoy the trip Peaky!

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